Kat Kruger

Fall 2011 Update

Querying is…going. Of the dozen or so mostly agents I’ve approached there are two left who have asked to see the manuscript. And I’ve got one mid-size publisher looking too. I’d say, on average, about 1/4 have been getting back to me personally. Usually to request the full manuscript. The rejections have been fairly consistent: strong writing but the market trends for the YA paranormal category are causing hesitation. That’s probably the most frustrating answer to me at the moment because my goal has always been to just write well and not think about trends since the publishing process is so. very. long. Writing a novel can take years before it’s in a state that can be sent to agents/publishers. Then there’s the whole process of getting it into the hands of someone who loves it, finessing it, and finally getting it into the market (which can also take a couple of years). Anything could change during that time?

I’m not losing faith though. In the meantime, I’m working on a NaNoWriMo project that’s an urban contemporary novel set in London. What can I say? I love to travel. You can read an excerpt on my participant page (krugerkat).

Some fun media alerts: the Writers’ Federation of Nova Scotia, who awarded me first place in the Atlantic Writing Competition, has a little blurb about me in their Eastword newsletter posted online recently. And on page 26 of the Fall 2011 issue of Atlantic Books Today, master storyteller Steve Vernon totally dropped my name! Finally, you can check out a Q&A with me at YA Simon (Simon & Schuster Canada’s book blog).

Grand Prize Winner of the Small Print Toronto Roald Dahl Day Story Contest

Congratulations to Sierra Maclean (age 10) who’s the Grand Prize Winner of the Small Print Toronto Roald Dahl Day Story Contest! Judging from the creativity of this story, I’m sure we’ll see more from Sierra in the future. I’m pleased to publish this piece on the site and hope that you’ll join in by offering many congratulations to Sierra on her accomplishment. Personally, ten is around the age when I knew I wanted to pursue a career in writing and it’s such a joy to be able to highlight a young talent here.

Julie Wilson has an exclusive interview with Sierra on Canadian Bookshelf where I also give a reading recommendation so be sure to check that out. Special thanks to Small Print Toronto for hosting the contest and partnering with us. And now, without further ado…

JAMES HEADS TO THE R.O.M.

I looked out the window of my aunt’s old one-storey apartment. The sun was just grasping the edge of the earth and the C.N. Tower sparkled in the distance. Countless buildings lined the streets of Toronto, standing tall and proud. I had always dreamed of leaping from one building to another, like a frog on lily pads.

“James! Come here!” my aunt called from the kitchen. Aunt Molly didn’t exactly volunteer to foster me when my parents died. In fact, she was forced to take me into her hands. She was forced to put up with my “silly imagination”, as she called it and she was forced to offer me a place to live my life.

I would have been happier if I could live my life somewhere else…ANYWHERE else. I wanted nothing more than to see the open road in front of me and feel the wind blowing my dark hair every which way. But it wasn’t that easy. Aunt Molly didn’t let me set a foot out of the house unless I was pulling weeds or watering her not-so-beautiful garden.

Once when I was five, I attempted sneaking out in the black of night, hoping that the darkness would swallow me up… out of my Aunt’s reach. But as I said before, it wasn’t that easy. Molly awoke when I scared away some seemingly harmless crows nibbling at the cornstalks. And before I knew it, she was whacking me with an old leather belt. The pain was such that I had never experienced before, apart from the grief and mourning I felt when my parents left me. Passed on to a new life…hopefully better than mine….

“JAMES, I SAID COME HERE!”

My day dream shattered to a million pieces and I retuned (sadly) to reality. But realizing the anger and impatience of Aunt Molly’s voice, I didn’t try to glue the pieces back together. Instead, I trudged into our tiny kitchen, just a helpless boy…

“Where were you? You were due here nearly 5 minutes ago!” Aunt Molly was usually like this. Stern, strict, and stony – otherwise known as the three S’s.

“You’re going to the R.O.M with me today,” she sighed.

My head sprang up in surprise. I had heard of the Royal Ontario Museum, but I had never dreamed of going there! But why would Aunt Molly take me? Wait… Since when have I cared?

The drive there was long and silent, but I was smiling the whole way. Strange noises erupted somewhere in the engine, but it was music to my ears. Nothing could penetrate the excitement and thrill I felt in my heart. Nothing at all.

We were still driving, but the great museum was visible in the distance. I looked out the window and laughed into the wind. Maybe the wind would carry my laugh somewhere far, far away, and another orphan would hear it. They would hear it and gain hope that a miracle might sprout somewhere in his life. After all, the wind is a powerful thing.

We pulled up in the parking lot (I had never been in a parking lot before) and climbed out of the rusty pick up truck. All of the other cars seemed to be new and sparkly, but I didn’t care. My mind was set on the inside of the museum. I wondered how high the ceilings looked from inside… I wondered how many floors there were… the questions were endless, stretching as far as the eye could see.

“Hurry it up, James.” Once again Aunt Molly had shattered my daydream, but this time I WANTED to return to reality.

I practically ran toward the museum, Aunt Molly in my wake. When I reached the huge door, my aunt caught up with me, panting.

“I didn’t want to bring you here, you know,” she said as she pushed open the door.

Ignoring Aunt Molly, I turned to face the interior of the museum. What was inside struck me like a lightning bolt…

Magnificent sculptures and artefacts lined the walls. Realistic wax figures, dinosaur skeletons, and interactive games were surrounded by tourists. People and families were scattered around like marbles, pointing to planes and parachutes that hung from the ceiling. It was beautiful. Well, beautiful for an orphan, I guess.

I glanced around. Aunt Molly seemed to have left. Maybe she went to the bathroom. I’d just have to discover the R.O.M. on my own. But what ought I do first? Everything looked so wonderful. I scanned the museum, searching for possible options. Maybe I should check out the dinosaur exhibit… or the vehicle section… Or the- wait, what was that? Out of the corner of me eye I saw the most peculiar thing – a small door. It stood alone beside a life-sized Viking. Why would there be a door there? And why so small?

I knew I shouldn’t go near the door, but it was difficult to control my curiosity. One side of me was like a green light… telling me to go forward and explore the world beyond. But the other was red… warning me to stop, not to go any further. Before I knew it, the two sides were arguing rapidly. What should I do?
You have to see what’s in there James!
But what if I’m caught?
You won’t be! Just do it!
But Aunt Molly could come back!!
Since when have you ever cared about Aunt Molly?
True…
C’mon. Don’t be a scaredy cat!
Alright, alright. But if anything happens to me…

“I have made my decision. I’m going through that door. And no one can tell me I can’t,” I whispered to myself as I strolled to the Viking exhibit.

I pretended to read the description of the sculpture, and then sneaked swiftly through the small opening. That was easy. There were no security guards or anything!

I stood up and soaked in my surroundings. As far as I could tell, I was standing in an old storage room. There were three brooms leaning against the unpainted walls and the floors were crafted of cement. In the middle of the room stood a magnificent, twenty foot tall peach. I sprinted toward it and took a bite out of the side. It tasted promising. I ran my hand along the fuzz. It felt promising.

“Did you hear that guys?” somebody whispered.

I whirled around. Surprisingly, no one was there.

“Yeah! Do you think someone found us?”

There it was again. I put my ear up to the peach. It seemed to be coming from the inside of it! Who (or what) could be in there? I had to find out…

Using my bite mark as a starting point, I scrambled up the side of the peach. A small hole was carved where the stem should be, revealing a tunnel of some sort. Curious, I ducked into the hole and began crawling through the tunnel ahead.

Eventually, I reached a huge room. Inside it there was a table, three wooden chairs, and a sofa. On the sofa sat the strangest creature I had ever seen. It was a bluish gray color with huge eyes, six arms, and red shoes.

The thing smiled, “Hello young fellow! I’m Fred. Welcome to our peach!”

“Our?” I asked.

“Oh yes. Would you like to meet my friends?”

“Ummm… sure,”

“Larry, Gary, come out and meet our new friend!”

Two more strange creatures came into view. One was bright yellow with orange spots and one was purple. They both had swirly antennae, plaid shirts, and little stubby arms.

“You don’t know how long we’ve been waiting for you!”

I was confused, “Why?”

The one called Larry pointed to a small remote on the table, “We’ve waited years for a child to discover us. That’s why we made the door so small. Now that you’re here, we can finally be set free!”

“But how can I set you free?” I wondered.

“The button on that remote can only be pressed by a kid.”

“What will happen when it’s pressed?

“The roof will open and allow the peach to fly out of it.”

“Wow!” I jogged over to the table and jabbed the little button.

“Thank you so much!” said Gary.

“No problem… I’d better get back, though,”

“Wait!” Fred yelped, “You can’t go! We’re already floating!”

“Sorry kid,” Gary patted me on the back.

I looked up at him and smiled, “I want to come,” I replied truthfully.

No more chores, no more Aunt Molly, no more sorrow. I was entering a new life, full of exploring and wonders – my two favourite things.

Small Print TO’s James & The Giant Peach Writing Contest

As I mentioned in my post earlier today, BookMadam & Associates Magazine is closing shop. One of the fun partnerships we were working on was Small Print TO‘s  James & The Giant Peach writing contest. Since today is Roald Dahl’s birthday, I figured I’d celebrate by making another formal announcement here. Here are the details:

To celebrate the 50th anniversary of Roald Dahl’s classic novel James & The Giant Peach, we invite writers 8-12 to take part in a citywide short story writing contest. Craft a short story (max 1500 words) about what would happen if James, a lonely orphan, discovered a peach as large as a house filled with friendly creatures, in today’s Toronto.

An all-star panel of judges – including CBC Radio host and author Kevin Sylvester, authors Adrienne Kress, Evan Munday and Vikki Vansickle, Susan Kernohan Director of Young Voices at the Toronto Public Library, Mark Medley, Book Editor at The National Post, and Janet Somerville, English Teacher, Royal St George’s College – will read aloud the top entries and award prizes at this year’s Toronto Roald Dahl Day celebration on Sunday October 23rd., at the Gladstone Hotel.

Send entries to roalddahlday@smallprinttoronto.org by Friday October 14th, 2011. The final work will be published here instead of on BookMadam.com in late October. By then I’ll have my new web site designed and we’ll be ready to party!

34th Atlantic Writing Competition

I have another happy dance moment to report: I placed first in the YA category of the 34th Atlantic Writing Competition!

Here’s the judge’s citation for my novel, “The Night has Teeth”:

There are a plethora of young adult novels that feature vampires, witches, zombies, ghosts and other types of the undead. What makes this manuscript unique is the strong narrative voice throughout. Meet Connor, a recently jilted student who escapes to a Paris university, only to discover that his new social circle includes werewolves. Mix in moody secondary characters, complex villains who may turn out to be heroes, and scenes that are both humorous and terrifying, thus enhancing the believability of the plot, and you have a truly engaging story. Overlay this with the contemporary theme of the ethics of genetic engineering (and no easy answers) and you have a manuscript worthy of first place. It even comes with an “everything you wanted to know about werewolves” study guide! And while this work is strong enough to be considered as a stand-alone novel, the writer has left room for sequels. “The Night has Teeth” should definitely be read by the light of a full moon.

So, technically, I’m now an award-winning writer and I haven’t even been published yet. Lots of big name East Coast authors, including the amazing Ami McKay have gone on to publish their works from the fiction category. I’m hoping this gives me a big gold star in the eyes of the YA publishing world.

Sad Panda Moments in the Life of an Aspiring Author

So, I didn’t make it into the final round of the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award. And the agent I had submitted Book #1 to didn’t care for the voice of my protagonist. Sure, I had a sad panda moment on each occasion but it’s not the end of the world.

Stunning original artwork by Kat Kruger ;)

I’ve been busily rewriting with feedback from a couple of friends who work in the industry to tighten the manuscript. Plus, I’ve just recently returned from Paris, the city where the book takes place. How can I not have a positive outlook? Even when the book is published, not everyone is going to love it. That’s just a simple fact of life. Right now, I just have to focus on finding someone who does.

In any case, I’ll be submitting to another agent I’ve been referred to with the hopes that the voice of my protagonist is compelling to her. Fingers crossed that I’ll turn the temporary sad panda frown upside down.

In the meantime, I’m working on Book #2 of the series which will take place partially in Northern Italy. And I’ve decided to try my hand at book review blogging in the form of short videos. First up (hopefully) later this week: Lauren DeStafano’s Wither (from The Chemical Garden trilogy).

 

Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award: Update #1

At the end of January, I entered my manuscript into the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award competition. I just found out that my entry made it into round two! It’s exciting news even though it doesn’t mean very much at this point. The first round whittled down 2,000 entries in half and was based solely on 300 word pitches. The next round will cut the 1,000 remaining entries in half again but will be based on a 3,000-5,000 word excerpt of the first part of the novels. Here’s hoping I make it through to the next round which will mean the full novel gets read. Regardless of what happens next, I’m doing a little happy dance to celebrate this one small bit of validation.

Best Tweet of 2010: @BookMadam

Sometimes it’s rough going when you’re a writer trying to push out that first book. The year 2010 marked twelve months of virtual ink, sweat and tears (in varying degrees) but I was able to finish Book One within my set deadline. Releasing it into the wild and into the hands of a couple of friends in the industry has been equally difficult on the nerves. All the questions of the past year have come up, particularly the ones related to ego. Like: is this really as good as I want it to be? I’m still struggling with that question because I have no personal benchmark of a previously published work to compare my work to, just all the success stories of writers who have “made it”—and that’s hardly a fair comparison but the mind wanders from time to time. All that said, the one tweet that made my year is the one I go back to on days when I’m feeling not quite good enough. Props and much love to my friend, Julie Wilson, for making 2010 gold to this one aspiring author. Let’s see what 2011 brings.

  1. Julie Wilson
    BookMadam Reading a friend’s manuscript and liking it = good. Reading a friend’s manuscript and forgetting it’s written by a friend = gold.

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Book Madam: Live to Chat with the Authors of the Caster Chronicles series

Earlier today I had the pleasure of chatting online at BookMadam.com with Kami Garcia and Margaret Stohl who co-wrote the wildly successful Beautiful Creatures and Beautiful Darkness. We talked about balancing promotion with writing, threw in a whole bunch of fun multimedia clips and even got in some foodie chat.

Book Madam Book Club Live-to-Chat: Kami Garcia and Margaret Stohl (The Caster Chronicles)

Killer revisions

Never look back

William Faulkner once wrote, “In writing, you must kill all your darlings.” I thought I would really start to feel that sentiment when I got down to draft two revisions. Here’s the thing though: after not touching any of draft one since I truly started the manuscript back in January, revisions came easy. Draft one took me straight until September to complete. That’s in no small part due to the fact that I have a full-time job in online community and social media that required me to travel extensively for a project.

That said, it’s mid-October and I’m just a chapter shy of finishing draft two. I even took a two week vacation in between—consider it research for book two in the series should I be lucky enough to land a deal. I’ve been pretty much ruthless when it comes to slashing pages of content. And I think I owe it to having what I’m going to call an Orpheus Rule: never look back. Looking back only causes heartache.

Some scenes were frankly garbage. I just typed through writer’s block to keep the story moving and eventually got to understand my characters and their motivations better. I’m not really one for outlining in the J.K. Rowling way. Writing has always come a bit more organically to me. But, I’m also not looking to write a 7-book series, so keeping all the details in check isn’t so much of a priority. The rest of what I cut has gone into a “futures” doc.

In any case, I’ve found this part of the process to be pretty seamless. Now comes the tricky part: an agent or not an agent? There are a number of big publishing houses that I’d love to sign on with but these are the dreamy places that absolutely require an agent to get through the mail slot. On the other hand, there are some medium sized publishing houses that I’d probably be just as happy with that wouldn’t require an agent. It’s a big question and one that I’m still trying to sort out as I wrap up draft two and send it off to a couple of bookish friends for reader input. I’ll keep you posted on the adventure and hope to update this blog a little more frequently now that I’ve got a bit more free time on my hands.

Oh, in the meantime, you can friend me on Facebook at my new vanity URL. Wait for it…facebook.com/krugerkat!